New Storyboard

Our opening so far was shown to the class to be peer assessed, it was clear that we needed to make a lot of changes as some of the lighting was bad, we chopped Callum's head off in one of the shots and we needed to change one of the pans. After that we got together as a group and talked about what we could do in order to improve it.

After Melissa and I started to edit through our shorts we found that it wasn't long enough and that some of the shots weren't as good as we would have liked. From this we got together as a group and decided what we could do to improve this, we decided that on the 5th of February some of us are going to take some shots in London outside the Houses Of Parliment. The teacher (Callum Carroll) is going to be following the Prime Minister's movements around London. Also we will have to introduce a new character (his wife) however we have not decided whether to see her or just hear her talking. For all she knows her husband is going to work as normal.

We will shoot;

• Callum on the train looking impatient/agitated 
• Callum amongst a crowd just walking
• Establishing shot of Callum smirking and gritting his teeth with the The Houses Of Parliment behind him
• Iconic buildings of London 

By including Callum on the train surrounded by ordinary people it highlights the contrast of how 'normal' he looks but how mentally unstable he is being portrayed to the viewers.

Not only do we have to shoot these shots but we will also have to go back to Jacobs house to re film some of the shots we had done previously and film the added shots we have talked about above.

This is our new and improved storyboard.